New Release: Unbearable by Kristen Hope Mazzola + Review

Unbearable by Kristen Hope Mazzola is LIVE! A sexy addition to the Passion, Vows & Babies Kindle World!

Amazon → http://amzn.to/2z22VOI

It is finally my time. I am an outlaw. The president of the Atlanta charter of the Unacceptables MC. You can call me Bear. I’ve given my blood, sweat, and life to my club. Devotion is a complete understatement. It wasn’t until a cute blonde walked into my garage that I considered giving myself to anything else. Her perfect smile drew me in. Her sass made me crazy. I'll do anything to protect my MC - and now her.

My Review:

3 stars

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 This was an okay-ish, quick read. This book is a cross over between the Unacceptables MC series by this author and Fiona Davenport's Yeah, Baby series.  This is Bear and Scarlett's story.  Scarlett discovers her husband cheating on her with her best friend. She leaves him on her motorcycle, but he follows her and runs her off the road. Bear is on the way back from  a motorcycle trip in which one of his brothers died. He comes upon Scarlett badly injured on the side of the road.  He takes her to the hospital and doesn't leave her side as she recovers. From there, he takes her home, helps her get on her feet and love ensues. 

The overall story line in the book was not bad. But I didn't really connect to the characters or their emotions. I don't know if it was because the book is a novella or what. Bear's real name was Rudiger Beringar, which I thought was a pretty strange name. I didn't love his redneck speech. There a lot of little plot holes and things that good editing might have caught. This book is an attempt at insta-love, like the Yeah, baby series' books, but I just did not feel it here. There were many cheesy, corny, eye-rolling moments.  But no real emotion or depth. Also, I didn't think this book very well as a standalone as there was a lot of stuff going on with the brother that died, etc., that I did not understand because I hadn't read any other Unacceptable MC books. Maybe if I had, I would have enjoyed this book more. 

Overall, though, this was an okay, short read. This was my first Kristen Hope Mazzola book. I will probably try her again in the future. 

 

  About the Author: I am just an average twenty-something following my dreams. I have a full time “day job” and by night I am an author. I guess you could say that writing is like my super power (I always wanted one of those). I am the lover of wine, sushi, football and the ocean; that is when I am not wrapped up in the literary world. Please feel free to contact me to chat about my writing, books you think I’d like or just to shoot the, well you know. A portion of all my royalties are donated to The Marcie Mazzola Foundation. 

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